07:35 AM 17/05/2019
Our Hot Potato Love
By Dr Love
A Love Song For 10allday
This one's for you 10allday!
My love for you is like the most hot potato,
Your face reminds me of kind blue bottles,
Together, we are like cornflakes and mayonnaise.
Oh darling 10allday,
My hot potato,
My kind potato,
The perfect companion to my cornflakes soul.
Strawberries are red,
Cornflowers are blue,
I like the moon reflecting off water,
But not as much as I love drinking with you!
Oh darling 10allday,
Your fingers are like rich boats on a summer day,
You're like the most loving ceo to ever walk brickcore.
Your kind blue bottle face,
Your mayonnaise soul,
Your rich fingers,
Your loving ceo being...
How could I look at another when our hot potato love is so strong?
I love you 10allday!
By Dr Love
A Love Song For 10allday
This one's for you 10allday!
My love for you is like the most hot potato,
Your face reminds me of kind blue bottles,
Together, we are like cornflakes and mayonnaise.
Oh darling 10allday,
My hot potato,
My kind potato,
The perfect companion to my cornflakes soul.
Strawberries are red,
Cornflowers are blue,
I like the moon reflecting off water,
But not as much as I love drinking with you!
Oh darling 10allday,
Your fingers are like rich boats on a summer day,
You're like the most loving ceo to ever walk brickcore.
Your kind blue bottle face,
Your mayonnaise soul,
Your rich fingers,
Your loving ceo being...
How could I look at another when our hot potato love is so strong?
I love you 10allday!
01:03 PM 14/06/2019
Yes 5/10
I wasn't sure if it was rap or poetry but either way the lyricwriters chosen for the gay love song could be improved with different and newer references, furthermore the beat was very weird in my opinion considering the style. I think you should describe the victim for the listeners to feel what you're saying. If there is a sequel to this fictional story, I hope there will be improvements to the characters and story.
I wasn't sure if it was rap or poetry but either way the lyricwriters chosen for the gay love song could be improved with different and newer references, furthermore the beat was very weird in my opinion considering the style. I think you should describe the victim for the listeners to feel what you're saying. If there is a sequel to this fictional story, I hope there will be improvements to the characters and story.