beneath the earth (Short poem)

Lovestruck Luminati
Joined 15/12/2017
Posts 55,768
01:15 AM 25/01/2020
Hidden away, beneath the Earth,
Are all the things I hid from you.
Much like Atlas bearing the sky,
I'm crushed by the secrets I keep.

I wish we left those where they were.
Hidden away, beneath the Earth.
I don't want to lie to you more.
But what you saw is who I am.

It's shameful, knowing I did this.
This is why I buried my sins,
Hidden away, beneath the Earth.
So you couldn't see the real me.

I'm sorry for what I did.
But I know that won't make you stay.
Leave me, and keep this tragedy,
Hidden away, beneath the Earth.


[epic] bramble
Joined 24/06/2019
Posts 3,637
01:15 AM 25/01/2020
i didnt even read it, i just replied but im guessing its good lol


Lovestruck Luminati
Joined 15/12/2017
Posts 55,768
01:16 AM 25/01/2020
Quote from bramble , 01:15 AM 25/01/2020
i didnt even read it, i just replied but im guessing its good lol
meh, it's alright.


[TBBH] reticle
Joined 31/07/2019
Posts 13,577
01:16 AM 25/01/2020
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Hope you enjoyed my poem!


Fortain
Joined 18/05/2019
Posts 40,417
01:16 AM 25/01/2020
if only i could write poems


Lovestruck Luminati
Joined 15/12/2017
Posts 55,768
01:17 AM 25/01/2020
Quote from Fortain , 01:16 AM 25/01/2020
if only i could write poems
poems are easy to write just speak your thoughts and mind.


[OGS] Damnatio
Joined 13/05/2017
Posts 3,520
07:35 PM 25/01/2020
This one is meh, I couldn’t connect to it like your previous ones


Lovestruck Luminati
Joined 15/12/2017
Posts 55,768
09:01 PM 25/01/2020
Quote from Damnatio , 07:35 PM 25/01/2020
This one is meh, I couldn’t connect to it like your previous ones
prob because i wrote it in 1 minute lol


[OGS] Damnatio
Joined 13/05/2017
Posts 3,520
10:21 PM 25/01/2020
Quote from Lovestruck Luminati , 09:01 PM 25/01/2020
Quote from Damnatio , 07:35 PM 25/01/2020
This one is meh, I couldn’t connect to it like your previous ones

prob because i wrote it in 1 minute lol
Lmfao hah

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